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FINALLYYYYY!!!

FINALLYYYYY!!!

AAAAAAUGH!!!

YEEEAAAHH!!!

:faint:

I...I'm too tired to type up a desc right now, I'm sorry. There's a couple of precision F-strikes there, of which I'm QUITE certain the second one is far more striking than the first (though I hope it's not TOO heavy still to break the rating). Be warned.

Also, I wanted to have some more character interaction, but alas...

However, this here thing marks the end of my not-horrible-ut-not-great entry, and I hope you all enjoyed it so far. Now just to hope for the judges' decision, which makes me suffer SO DAMN MUCH NOW because if I lose, Chi dies a very slow, very painful, and very traumatic death thanks to a silly misunderstanding. Baw :<

Alright now I do kindasorta have time for a proper desc: First and foremost, I'm...sorry Chi didn't get much of the spotlight this round. I just thought it was necessary for her inner workings to remain mysterious for the time being, and I'm serious about this :< I know this makes it seem like it's Hernando who's my character for RoA instead of her, yes, but I kinda wanted to pull away from Chi and show a slightly larger picture, and try to make it clear that she's just a factor in my plot--a major factor at that, yes, but one among several nonetheless.

Anyway, I...don't know what else to say here. I look at this and I think the plot is good, but there's so many things that could play against me in it D'<

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That was quite the journey you took us on, Dark. And I for one enjoyed the character interaction, along with all the humor and action you described.

Congrats on finishing, dude. And I'd with you luck, buuuuuuut... you know. Opponents and all that. ='D